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Comments for 'Getting to Ones Mind'



MadJackal
5:48 am | February 26, 2004
I agree with Helljumper, it was very good. I'm not much of a poem writer myself, so I was naturally very impressed with your work on this one. It was very effective.
Helljumper
2:30 am | February 3, 2004
really good one
Hawk7886
1:03 am | February 2, 2004
The last line was a tad too long. . .
Walker
9:42 pm | January 31, 2004
Nice.
CoLd BlooDed
1:34 am | January 31, 2004
Wow, Jamirus I haven't talked to you or seen any of your negative comments towards H_K's stories for a long time! :P
Jamirus99
1:03 am | January 31, 2004
Long time no see for the both of us, eh? Not bad at all, missing some apostrophes here and there, but really pretty good.
teemus
9:13 pm | January 30, 2004
It was good. Your last one was a tad bit better though. 9/10


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