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Comments for 'Battle for Sigma Octanus'



monitor101
9:48 pm | August 16, 2003
Well anyways its better than my version.
Jinkaiden-XI
2:15 pm | August 16, 2003
Hmm...I see. Well, I suppose even for someone who got the idea from a book, you've got some potential. I guess it would seem likely to make something like this a starting point, although first impressions are everything.

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Cire117
12:56 am | August 15, 2003
ok i didnt look around to see if anyone had written this story before now, but beleive me this is all out of my head, i wrote this right after i read that chapter in the fall of reach, so id figure id write a fanfic
Jinkaiden-XI
12:09 am | August 15, 2003
I was going to say, Monitor101 has already written this story before...

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monitor101
6:59 pm | August 14, 2003
This is a lot like my story The Battle for Sigma Octanus. It started out the same the guy is walking along when all of a sudden the air fills up with plasma. Did you like copy mine of something? Any ways don't over load the action and try to make a new paragragh whenever somone is speaking. 8/10
Kaboose
12:39 pm | August 14, 2003
Cire117, this was really good...you've got great potential..but you have to admit that it was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too short...

9/10


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