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Comments for 'THE RETURN part two'

Dave Luck
6:38 pm | July 19, 2004
I like Chuckles' style of writing. It reminds me of those thrillers I liked to read during lunch at school.

Yup. Great - as usual.

This time, indentation matters little. It's still easy to follow, and it seems to be okay.

Chuckles, you're a good writer. And I liked your series about the Multiplayer Team killer. Next time I play any multiplayer game, I'm turing Friendly Fire off.

- Dave.
10:55 am | July 19, 2004
white grunt
11:56 am | July 17, 2004
great story is this based on u lan? or u thought it about cuz it's really good..

grunts rock
12:57 am | July 17, 2004
Ah, a clifhanger.
12:43 am | July 17, 2004
Nate/Simjanes used to be the best gamer in our group, The Grand Rapids FragPile. Then he was gone for a while because of college. A few weeks ago he posted on our fansite that he was gonna be at the next two fragfests and that he had "no team, no friends, no allies."

I read that, and got the idea for this story.

C.T. Clown
Gold Elite
8:45 pm | July 16, 2004
Can you help me with my MPFF? Please?
7:06 pm | July 16, 2004
I think it looks fine Chuckles.
6:56 pm | July 16, 2004
I do use the code, just not for paragraphs. I like spaces better than indents. For me it is easier to read. Like I said, a by-product of too much writing on forums. I'm sorry if that manner of paragraphing bothers anyone.

C.T. Clown
6:48 pm | July 16, 2004
Really cool story. Just try to use the code next time.
4:51 pm | July 16, 2004
Who cares about the code when it's this good?
2:47 pm | July 16, 2004
I do use the code, just not for indenting. I got used to spacing my paragraphs instead of indenting from years of on-line forums.

C.T. Clown
2:04 pm | July 16, 2004
Keep 'em coming Chuckles.
Slit Throat
1:12 pm | July 16, 2004
Great as usual!

Odd though, it seems to read fine even without the code!
11:49 am | July 16, 2004
Somehow the final stanza of my poem stole a line from the stanza before it. They are all supposed to be four lines.

C.T. Clown