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Comments for 'THE RETURN part one'



Ajax
7:08 pm | July 15, 2004
Lol Jess. Noice.
Jessica
6:32 am | July 13, 2004
Uh Huh...i know i'm a bitch...

Beautiful
Individdual
That
Causes
Hard-ons

^.^

Jess
Nick Kang
12:09 am | July 13, 2004
Drinks in me! Wait...I'm underage...

NK
Ajax
8:29 pm | July 12, 2004
Sweetness! *Pulls a windmill*
Severan
4:57 pm | July 12, 2004
No fucking way! Spick boy is banned?
Dave Luck
4:42 pm | July 12, 2004
I'm Lovin' It. And this is not Macdonalds.

Heck, you make Tom Clancy appear boring. Great stuff, man!

I love your works man, they're like art!
Chuckles
3:41 pm | July 12, 2004
SB

Thanks on both counts. About time that guy got banned.

I guess if you can't write, spamming is all you can do, eh? Good riddance.

C.T. Clown
343 Salty Beans
3:16 pm | July 12, 2004
Great news-SS got banned...talked to Louis about it. Now I can give some decent comments on this story.

I like your style of writing, Multiplayer FFs are few, far-between, and usually a load of crap. Yours, however, are better.

343SB
Nick Kang
11:20 am | July 12, 2004
Great story, Chuckles. I like your style of writing :)

And as for ss, shut the fuck up you cocksucking piece of shit. Go operate your trash truck route.

NK
343 Salty Beans
2:29 am | July 12, 2004
You know, I have a feeling when Spanish Spartan isn't weighing the American economy down, trying to forge a form for the unemployment office, or "Studying human anatomy" (aka porn), he comes to this site to see how many people he can regularly piss off.

Apparently, he's not very bright. The people who's adjectives are all cusswords usually are the ones too dumb to learn any new ones. Makes sense, doesn't it?

Being the official spammer of HBO isn't a sought-after position; kind of like being a secretary, or in your case, a trash truck operator.

I hope you drown in a public toilet. That way, you can eat sh!t before you die.

343SB

PS: oh and sorry, good story.
jaguar marine
2:20 am | July 12, 2004
I liked the style of writing. The action was kind of hazy if you know what i mean but anyone with half a brain could figure it out in a little bit right. Have you ever thought of writing a Science Fiction novel with its very own story line i mean you really don't have to use spartans to make this story good. In short I liked it.
white grunt
9:52 pm | July 11, 2004
running away dam
white grunt
9:45 pm | July 11, 2004
love your story's it makes miss the days I had an xbox so that I could play wtih my friends...stupid sister's boyfriend for jacking my xbox and ran away.coward revenge will be mine mahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha.....good thing I have halo on PC..great story

grunts rock
spanish spartan
4:26 pm | July 11, 2004
Take awakar's advice read my enlightening posts.
spanish spartan
4:24 pm | July 11, 2004
I AM THE OFFICIAL SPAMMER OF HBO. FUCK ALL U BITCHES
Severian
11:29 am | July 11, 2004
Peace and love. What a horrific combination...

great story, by the way.
Awacar
6:43 am | July 11, 2004
Read every post spanish spartan has ever written, amd imagine him speaking to himself.

*finds the meaning of life once again*

Good story, as Shifty said, it has a certain style, a certain way of "being", a mood or whatever, just bringing that into a story is good work.
Chuckles
4:57 am | July 11, 2004
Thanks guys. It may only be two stories, possibly three. I am not sure.

C.T. Clown
Red Ghost
3:38 am | July 11, 2004
Hurrah Ajax! You tell that #@#$@#$%&^&*^%$#%$#@$#@@$$%%###$$#@#$%%$##$%%^*&%$...good job
Red Ghost
3:38 am | July 11, 2004
Hurrah Ajax! You tell that #@#$@#$%&^&*^%$#%$#@$#@@$$%%###$$#@#$%%$##$%%^*&%$...good job
Ajax
3:36 am | July 11, 2004
Comprende?
Ajax
3:34 am | July 11, 2004
Hey Spanish Spartan, do us all a favor and go fuck yourself, you little pillow-biting dipshit.
Red Ghost
3:34 am | July 11, 2004
Ah...that's so great! Hurrah! And come on Spanish, it didn't suck that bad. I like the multiplayer thing- will it take place in other areas? Say Sidewinder? Hmm...I wonder what he's going to do with that toy...
spanish spartan
3:18 am | July 11, 2004
WELL, IT SUCKED,AND SO DO U
Mastergrunt
1:57 am | July 11, 2004
Nice:)
Ajax
6:12 pm | July 10, 2004
A MPFF series, eh? + one of the best writers at HBO = Sweetness
Slit Throat
2:47 pm | July 10, 2004
Turn that intro into a poem!

As for the restů I can die happy.

10/10
Shifty
1:32 pm | July 10, 2004
I absolutely love your style of writing... It has its own... how do you say... 'mood' and I love it.
It's great how all your stories (though not in a single series) link together... I'm gunna miss reading them. This is probably one of the only 'Multiplayer' based stories I enjoy (Though I haven't read all of them)...
Keep it up.

Shifty


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