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Comments for 'It Hurts But Still'



Chief-117
12:07 am | March 30, 2004
J-117 you are absolutely right.
J-117
4:59 pm | March 5, 2004
its a poem about pain and personal troubles, if i am correct.
someone that you dont know
5:23 am | March 5, 2004
i dont get it
Dark-NiTe
2:30 am | March 4, 2004
Very good.
Walker
10:43 pm | March 3, 2004
I concur with Odin.
Helljumper
12:13 pm | March 3, 2004
thumps up
Chief-117
12:00 pm | March 3, 2004
SOS.Odin you did not understand it because it speaks my inner feelings. Somethin happened to me a few days ago so I wrote this poem, I just incorporated some things about Halo so I could post it here. I didnt want to post it on some pussy site where other poets write back about their pains cuz I dont care bout theirs, just mine. Thanx for likin it
J-117
5:32 am | March 3, 2004
thats some of the best shit ive eva seen man, nice, mind if I make a song out of it? lol, trying to make a beat here...
.
5:24 am | March 3, 2004
lame...
Sentinel
3:09 am | March 3, 2004
I've been there. Not directly though, but similar.
SOS.Odin
3:08 am | March 3, 2004
ahh ok
now i dont feel so dumb :D
Jon M
3:08 am | March 3, 2004
Not understanding a poem is a good thing. It's supposed to make you uncomfortable. Every word is its own paragraph...where its placed...what it says. You have to figure it out...what it means to you.

Nice poem, Chief.
Solidus Snake
11:57 pm | March 2, 2004
Hmm... it was okay, nice try, although I would like to see more poems from you. It's not often I see poems anymore...
SOS.Odin
11:35 pm | March 2, 2004
i liked it
although i did not fully understand
'Nosolee
10:07 pm | March 2, 2004
nice
Mainevent
9:04 pm | March 2, 2004
I liked it lot as well. Very descriptive and portrayed a lot of emotion.
Awacar
5:33 pm | March 2, 2004
That was a great poem.
B-Man
2:51 pm | March 2, 2004
Very Impressive, I like it...:-D


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