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Comments for 'Outlaw, Chapter 3: MedBay and Taking The Fight Back' |
Anonymous
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
HEY!
Who took my posts out?
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Knightmare(MM
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Cassani, the story was good, just remember, at some points its good to leave spaces between paragraphs, I found myself getting lost more than once because I had nothing to use as a 'landmark'.
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Spark
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Hey Chris Cassani this is a good series you've got going here. Your characters are likeable and interesting, your writing is well done and kept my attention, and the story keeps you in suspense to find out what is happening. Don't listen to jerks like this Anonymous bozo or any of these other guys, who think the only people who can write Halo are themselves. Keep on writing.
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