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Comments for 'I am Sniper'



max3949
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
do some proofreading and make part 2 because there needs to be a better conclusion. it's great, but work on the 2 things i mentioned.p.s. MAKE IT LONGER!
A fellow author
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Not bad! Very good story. Ending was morbidly hilarious. Keep up the good work.
vector40
12:00 am | November 30, -0001

Very nice! A fitting conclusion and an honorable end. Good work. Perhaps a bit more development of our character would have been nice, but oh well. . .

With any luck, we can bring a little nobility back to the profession :) Poor snipey.

Don't stop!

-I am Vec



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