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Comments for 'Warning: escaping convicts can be allies in disguise (Part 1)'



sry hit keyoard..
1:51 am | August 25, 2003
jason told me to say, he;s changed.. he's in HS now, oing steady,and syas sry to eveyrone.
xgh
1:41 am | August 25, 2003
xfgghfg
jason horwath
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
very good now finish it up.
MasterChief21
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Its very good, but you have an error. The elite in the end scence on legendary is an Elite Minor with blue armor, not a major with red armor. It is possible that your not using the same scene that im talking about though.
TrueNike
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Good. . .good but short. Keep writing.
Jaywhit10
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
niice, very nice. I like where this is going, can't wait for the next one. Keep it up
good
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
prety good but too short. keep writing we'll see what you come up with. like the sory so far though
Robo42786
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
short, but intrestng setup you have going. im anxious to read more.


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