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Comments for 'HALO 2: Earth's Reclaimer (part eins)'



Silent Hunter
11:00 am | July 7, 2003
Ya, but there could've been more, and the fact that there was different parts that wasn't in the trailer, and that there was almost nothing else, I'd give it a 6/10
nicholas
2:20 pm | July 6, 2003
It was just the trailer put into a fanfic. And that makes four of us Silent Hunter
Silent Hunter
12:11 pm | July 6, 2003
Makes three of us, Berconius...(he could've ment the thunder, but that's just me)

you also spelled wisdom wrong...

Anyway I agree with Shadowrunner, you can be good, but this chapter (eins? what's with that?) wasn't anything new from the trailer.
Berconius
5:56 pm | July 5, 2003
Makes two of us, Steele...

my words of Random wisedom for today:

"If Death stares you in the face, point out the cataract it has in it's left eye for me, will ya? and tell him to get it checked out, too."

7/10
Steele
4:44 pm | July 5, 2003
I can honestly say that I've never heard a cloud...
Shadowrunner
11:00 am | July 5, 2003
You write good, but when you take an already made piece of a story (the E3 Halo 2 trailer) make it EXACTLY like it... otherwise it is confusing and not "authentic", and stop calling it Part Eins like a german... that can really make less people read your story.

But anyways, good writing. If you make your own story good this could be VERY cool

7/10


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