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Comments for 'On The Run: The complete Sam's Flashback Chapter part 1 of 2'



story critic
7:56 am | February 12, 2004
You need to improve your writing skills, but it's a good story no offense
Hawk7886
7:38 pm | February 10, 2004
Sereph, Banshee, Ghost, Covenant, and Elite. Proper nouns are capitalized. Don't forget that, it's really easy to mess up a story with simple errors like that.


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