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Comments for 'The Rise and Fall of the Flood chapter 6'



Arthur Wellesly
1:21 am | August 25, 2003
Yea, that was good, but just try to form your sentences better. They tend to be overly long, sometimes run-on, and confusing.

Other than that, I like the story. Interesting how the Forerunner are respresented.
Reiyou
1:44 am | August 24, 2003
10/10
Damn, that thing is HUGE.
I'd hate to run in to that with out a Scorpion ;)
BlackValkyire
5:36 pm | August 22, 2003
Cheers!

Uh...that huge thing wasn't an Overlord...read previous chapters...overlords are about the size of a cruiser
Elfster
4:46 pm | August 22, 2003
10/10! That rocked!

It's uhh... pretty weird that the Overlord would be that. I always thought of it as more insect/dragon-like. But a flood-infested tree works LoL.


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