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Comments for 'Halo 2: Alpha Base 5 USNC (part 2)'



CoLd BlooDed
11:15 pm | November 15, 2003
again good job, in this part you made things more spaced out, but remember my previous advice. Also you use to many capitals, instead use italic when someone is speaking over the loudspeakers.


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