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Comments for 'The Long Ride Home 7: Deja Vu'



Ivon8ltls
11:06 am | May 20, 2002
I just caught up with all the chapters you've written and they are good. You are forgetting one major point in your characters: Cortana's sassiness. What happened to her? Is she finally degenerating? I NEED MORE CORTANA BRATTINESS...LOL. Great story. Back to qwerty, young man, and give us more.
Jaywhit10
11:58 am | May 9, 2002
Shit i did it again i ment much*
Jaywhit10
11:56 am | May 9, 2002
There really isn't anything wrong with you story. I like it really mush and I find it interesting. Keep It Up
PanZer
3:41 am | May 9, 2002
Interesting, but I haven't been following this story, so I don't really know what's going on. You did a good job with the Elite's names. I always have trouble thinking of names that sound good. Plasma shotgun. Spiffy :)
Infernal
10:15 pm | May 8, 2002
hey humans, sorry I haven't sent in the new chapters. I've been kinda busy. Tell me if you like or what you don't like about it.


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