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Comments for 'Through the eyes of a grunt pt 2 of 6'



Scraps
4:15 am | June 16, 2004
Great seris, keep up the good work. I love how the story is so smooth and easy to follow.
BansheeBoy
8:40 am | May 30, 2004
Hallejuja!!
I finally got the third part of this series on.
It will be there for the next update
BansheeBoy
8:40 am | May 30, 2004
Hallejuja!!
I finally got the third part of this series on.
It will be there for the next update
The Huntress
8:51 pm | May 28, 2004
I like this series so far! i think it's fricken awseome that there's a smart Grunt for once! they're just annoying and get in the way, but all that will change in Halo 2.
FlAmInGeLiTe
4:12 pm | May 28, 2004
tone down the laungage, but all in all it was pretty good.
BansheeBoy
2:09 pm | May 28, 2004
Due to unforeseen circumstances ( basically that I can't get my work onto the site for some reason ) I won't be posting the next in this series till the update after the next update. Sorry Guys!
BansheeBoy
3:41 pm | May 27, 2004
Bastip's a ops grunt. Specially trained. The best of the best.
white grunt
3:23 pm | May 27, 2004
it even better than the first. one question is the grunt a ops grunt or nomal one?


PS op mean black grunt
BansheeBoy
6:12 am | May 27, 2004
I'll use the dang code!
Nick Kang
9:23 pm | May 26, 2004
I found a lot of erroes in there. Let's begin.
1.) You need to capialize Pillar of Autumn, Human, and any other thing that I might have missed.
2.) You are using Human swear words with Covies. Even though I consider most of these things translated, the idea of a Grunt 'hauling his ass out of the lifepod' brings a few questions to mind.
3.) The story was kind of confusing.
4.) It lacked proper punctuation and comma use.
I probably missed a lot of stuff, but other than these things, it was just as good as the first.

NK
H1 Pro
8:15 pm | May 26, 2004
I'm starting tolike this series even more and more. But you should use the code.

H1
No one
6:43 pm | May 26, 2004
I like your writing and i am intrested in your series. But a smart grunt? Isn'T that a bit strange.
BansheeBoy
4:24 pm | May 26, 2004
Thanks GP-02 that means a lot to me and I will try and hurry up with the next part. Also don't forget to read Get off our planet! by the one the only BansheeBoy.
Peace Out!
GP-02
3:05 pm | May 26, 2004
Im really getting to like this series. I also like that its going to be 6 parts to give more detail. All i can say is keep up the good work. And hurry with the next part. LoL.


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