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Comments for 'A Single Motion: part 3'



Steele
8:06 pm | April 7, 2003
I give this one an 83. I actually enjoyed it. (A rarity now, You wouldn't beleive how many people have trouble writing so you can understand them). I do think though that the Covenant seemed far more advanced at that day than when Humanity fights them in 2500.
Other than that I have only one more thing to say. Do you really think that a sophiscticated doctor or military personnel would use copy and paste for something as important as that?
Arthur Wellesly
2:42 pm | April 5, 2003
Hey, that's a great idea!
LordfoDestruction
3:47 am | April 5, 2003
Well, i guess that the deaths of billions, if not trillions of innocent and semi-innocent humans and aliens, rests on one mans shoulders. Well, I guess that even the smallest thing can change the course of the future, in this case, a 165 grain bullet. You need to do a follow up on an alternate future if that one man hadn't fired his weapon.
Ghost
11:38 am | April 4, 2003
Sure. I'm trusting not to get spammed by everyone though. E-mail is simonjames290@hotmail.com
LostRock
8:33 pm | April 3, 2003
So, what can Earth do to defend itself? it doesn't seem like there's any possibility of defeating the Covenant.
James Kinsella
7:24 pm | April 3, 2003
As always a good story. I know your sending them to me but they get better after i see them. Keep it up!


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