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Comments for 'Another ONI Black File: Halo - We Got There First: Part 1'



Steele
11:04 am | April 17, 2003
Yeah, there was and I'm pretty sure there was one called Gettysburg too...
Steele
2:35 pm | April 16, 2003
The Ticonderoga class is in service today with the USN as a Guided Missile Cruiser, that's why I said something.
Arthur Wellesly
2:20 pm | April 16, 2003
Heh, you caught me Steele, but there was a ship called the Iroqouis... maybe they would continue to name a ship-class after the poor ol' Native Americans.
Arthur Wellesly
2:20 pm | April 16, 2003
Heh, you caught me Steele, but there was a ship called the Iroqouis... maybe they would continue to name a ship-class after the poor ol' Native Americans.
Havok
1:15 pm | April 16, 2003
i think Ticonderoga was a great name for the ship. they used that name in starship troopers too. never mind....
Steele
10:33 pm | April 15, 2003
Yeah, very eye catching title. That's the trick nowadays. Excellent story. Ticonderoga-class guided missile cruiser. Series completed from 1983 to 1994, twenty-seven in class. Displacment of around 10,000 tons fully loaded.

Other than the use of the Ticonderoga name this story was pretty good. 9/10. I try to use names other than todays, but slightly similar.
Anyway keep it up.
Havok
8:29 pm | April 15, 2003
very well written. we neede more ONI type stories
Traumatised Marine
6:43 pm | April 15, 2003
There couldn't be a more deserving fic to have the top slot!
That's a very eye-catching title, eh Aurthur? ;)
Shadow Spartan
5:54 pm | April 15, 2003
very nice my friend, an excellent job...i really didn't see any problems...no action :( but its the beginning, so that doesnt really matter. very detailed...yeah, good job 9.5/10
Arthur Wellesly
5:33 pm | April 15, 2003
Note: This series is a branch-off from "A Single Motion" so as not to confuse anybody.


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