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Comments for 'No Way Out: Part 1'



Agent Shade
7:50 pm | December 10, 2003
i wanna learn the German language, since Rammstein is such a sweet ass band
Josh Plev
8:33 am | December 10, 2003
Hey, the translation is correct, but its a bit off. I know a bit of German, so i could traanslate most of it. Also, www.freetranslation.com is cool, but they don't put the verbs and shit like that in correctly.

translation:

Yavol! You have written a very good fic.
I find it very interesting.

Very well made!!
Josh Plev
8:28 am | December 10, 2003
Damn, almost all the stories i read, i like. Dude, this is awsome. Reminds me of winter in MN. Anyway, this story rocks! Good attnetion to detail and shit, I liked how you described how the Lt. felt. You mentioned how the installation felt somewhat errie and deathly. the Flood??
Like i said, awsome story man.
AmokTheClown
5:03 am | December 10, 2003
i liked it alot. huge attention to detail, but it wasn't painfully so. really like how you described everything, how the Lieutenant felt, etc. nice description of the colonel, i know a few that are like that. keep it up, i'll be waiting for the rest of the series
'Nosolee
1:52 am | December 10, 2003
Nice job. Haven't read any of your works yet, but I'm looking forward to!
Arthur Wellesly
9:47 pm | December 9, 2003
Thanks guys.
Agent Shade
9:36 pm | December 9, 2003
translation:

Yavol! You wrote one very well fic. It is find very interressen I.

Very well made!

...that's what www.freetranslation.com says lol
Krankenschwester
9:31 pm | December 9, 2003
Yavol! Du hast eine sehr gut fic geschreiben.
Es ist sehr interressen finde ich.

Sehr gut gemacht!!
Agent Shade
8:12 pm | December 9, 2003
were have you been lately dude? awesome story naturally, if i was a noob, i'd say something like "FUKIN AWESOME DOODE 12323526565/10" but i'm not a noob, so well done, welcome back and keep writing...

i'm sorry to spam Arthur, but since im sure other people will be reading your story, i just want to say quickly that i started a new Shadow Ops II story. sorry Arthur
Jamirus99
11:12 am | December 9, 2003
He's back! Unbelievable attention to detal, AW....I think I'm smelling another great series in the works!


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