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Comments for 'A Story of Betrayal, Part 1: The Return Home'



BlackGhost
4:26 am | April 25, 2004
Sorry double post.
BlackGhost
4:24 am | April 25, 2004
I liked it. I especially liked the Rick James. :) I'm assuming you got that from the Chappele's (sp) Show. Anyways, keep up the good work.
BlackGhost
4:24 am | April 25, 2004
I liked it. I especially liked the Rick James. :) I'm assuming you got that from the Chappele's (sp) Show. Anyways, keep up the good work.
Master_Chief189
5:22 pm | April 24, 2004
Good story. Just separate the dialog.
The REAL Nick Kang
3:00 pm | April 24, 2004
It seems like you didn't pay much attention to H: FS(if you read it at all). Just because Halo is 04, that doesn't mean there are only three more. Think about it. There is a 0 before the 4. That means there are at least 10 Halos. And two men destroyed the two Covie fleets. Not one. Then, Cortana uploaded all of the Covenant technologies into her database, so destroying the Covie flagship wouldn't matter(i think.).

NK
The REAL Nick Kang
1:24 pm | April 24, 2004
That isn't me! It's my friend Shawn.

NK
Nick Kang
1:14 pm | April 24, 2004
ur story is horrible i cant believe you wrote it! Dumb Faget


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