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Comments for 'GTA: Carjacking Evolved'



Bitch
10:23 pm | November 10, 2003
Dude that fucking rocked. Even though you spelled words wrong and didn't use proper punctuation and i couldn't tell what the fuck was going on half the time, it was funny as shit.
anonymous
2:33 pm | April 26, 2003
Hey, it has his e-mail adress... *grins evilly*
Very Stupid
6:48 pm | April 7, 2003
Im a big fan of GTA. Now you made it sound stupid
who could make GTA sound gay. oh cool I rymed just
like that one part in youre stupid story
I give it a -258 out of 10
This story sucks my balls
7:57 pm | April 4, 2003
i think my name says it all. You suck anonymous
James Kinsella
2:24 am | March 31, 2003
If you sued than he could wave his first amendment right. Unfortunatly for the rest of us that means we can't be reimbursed for our wasted time. Oh well.
Dispraiser
2:51 am | March 30, 2003
Yeah, killing the innocent and old gets old... i mean, at first it's like "whoa, I never knew I could kill so many cops and old people" But then later it's like "Another old person... GIve me your money... Another cop. Prepare for death.." THis fanfics sucked though... I think I would sue him had he not been anonymous.
gruntkiller
12:08 pm | March 29, 2003
i'm probobly the only one on earth who didn't like any of the GTA games and to me it was like sitting down and having to play one. very very wrong and badly done this is why the recycle bin is on the desktop, to delete pices of crap like this before they can annoy the hell outta everybody else
Masta Chief
2:26 pm | March 28, 2003
That was the shittiest thing ive ever read...I never thought someone could make GTA gay.
el_halo_diablo
12:09 pm | March 28, 2003
lol nice one Grunt
Grunt
12:06 pm | March 28, 2003
the story made no sense, it was as u say in america "Gay".
Michael Frank
2:42 am | March 27, 2003
It was funny as funny as Hell, keep it up!
Michael Frank
2:42 am | March 27, 2003
It was funny as funny as Hell, keep it up!
Steele
1:14 am | March 26, 2003
I'm going to wast plenty of time commenting on his feceal matter! What were you thinking. I think you just started hitting the keyboard at random, hoping like hope itself something would pop up.

When I first saw the title I thought it might be funny. But, boy was I ever wrong. The comments are funnier than that story. That was Redneck, with just a hint of Ghetto.
el_halo_diablo
11:46 pm | March 25, 2003
haha thats the beauty of America. You can sue for anything! ;D
Dispraiser
8:37 pm | March 25, 2003
Am I allowed to sue him for that?
Arthur Wellesly
4:41 pm | March 25, 2003
Yea... hahaha. I guess I'm just as guilty because I'm responding TWICE!

Also, what did you say about me, monitor? I got to stupid? I'm... mortified.
Traumatiused Marine
8:37 am | March 25, 2003
You people shock me! Dispraiser, Aurthur Wellesly and all these other great writers sometimes don't get more than a couple of comments, yet look how many are willing to comment on filth like this!

Channel that 15 seconds of typing somewhere worthy!
HaloMaster7
4:41 am | March 25, 2003
wtf is wrong with this kid? does he think he is funny or something?
Jeff Graham
3:51 am | March 25, 2003
Ooookaaay. That was, umm, BAD! What the hell, that was more messed up that ME! ME! for god sakes, and from what people say about me, I am wierd. Damn, you are one messed up guy. Maybe you should gte off of the sauce, or weed, or what ever the hell you are doing, jeez.


P.S. No, I am not metal, I ma just angry, I could have written better on my worst day. I feel better now, yay. HA HA. Good day all.
Austin Peters
1:48 am | March 25, 2003
My eyes! Good God, does anyone have industrial strenght cleanser?
monitor101
10:43 pm | March 24, 2003
Okokokokokokokokokokokokok I swear to god Anonymous you son of a bitch mofo if your that same Anonymous then boy I'm goona beat the hell outta you and the story sucked ass!! And wellesly you got to stupid.
Arthur Wellesly
10:12 pm | March 24, 2003
This was awesome! It's Grrrrrrrrrrreat! Woo! What a joy to read! Worthy of Shakespeare, King, and Tolkein! Seven thumbs up!

I guess right now I am as cracked up as the author....
Dispraiser
9:35 pm | March 24, 2003
Right when I thought HBO was beggining to get only quality writing.
LostRock
5:41 pm | March 24, 2003
What the hell indeed.
Disgusted
5:28 am | March 24, 2003
This was one of the worst crap i have ever read along with an unoriginal title.
Steele
1:27 am | March 24, 2003
Where you sober when you 'wrote' that?
Sarge
9:56 pm | March 23, 2003
Try having your stories make the slightest bit of sense it helps...
el_halo_diablo
9:11 pm | March 23, 2003
Um, Author, do you have any idea what you just wrote?
Ghost
8:35 pm | March 23, 2003
That sucked! It had almost nothing to do with GTA, was poorly written and hard to follow. Don't write a sequel.


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