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Comments for 'HALO: Pilots of Autumn' |
WargodX2399
3:31 pm | November 24, 2002
Lol captain Jacob of the Keyes. I like it. I've got to tell kyle to put that into our MAOMC2 story. Thanks for the idea Jake. Oh yah I recommend changing ur name from Jacob Anderson to Capt. Jacob of the Keys. Now THAT would be cool.
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Jake
3:20 am | November 21, 2002
lol, saturn, thanks for pointing that out, its a typo. should be just 'jacob keyes of the...'
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Jake
3:15 am | November 21, 2002
lol, thank you both. This is my first time, im pleased you both like it. I'll work on the choppiness.
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saturn
3:13 am | November 21, 2002
ooop. that was me. forgot to enter my name. sry.
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Anonymous
3:11 am | November 21, 2002
"Captain Jacob of the Keyes of the UNSC Pillar of autumn". just a little awkward, but doesnt compromise the story. not bad at all, just seemed a tad choppy. um, lets see. this is the kind of story that shines with intricate descriptions incorporated with the dailogue. if u continue, thats my only suggestion. great job rookie. befor u know it, u could be a hot MAC.
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el_halo_diablo
9:54 pm | November 20, 2002
I've always wanted t see those fighters engage the covenants scouting group. good work for a...first time right? Keep goin at it!
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