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Comments for 'The...uhh...first part'



The Huntress
10:05 pm | June 21, 2004
With the first sentence i was laughing so hard that i was crying!!!! and then you're little story at the end about ablabalhdf or what ever his name was, was the strangest thing i've ever heard. keep up the comedy!
Scraps
3:47 am | June 16, 2004
Well if I can give you anything at all it's that this story is different, but that is it. The story is choppy, every other word is misspelled, it has no plot, and the story is just plain stupid. I don't know if you were just playing joke or if you were actually somebody trying with a learning disablity but this site is already full of good stuff and it doesn't need any of you rubbish filling it up.
Someonewhojustreadthisehh...fanfic
3:23 pm | June 13, 2004
your characters seems to be very hungry all the time.
a guy
2:49 pm | June 11, 2004
i think of things like balalalalala the monkey when i have a feaver
InSaNe1024
3:23 am | June 10, 2004
0.o

That was really funny!
Just remember to forget your meds when you write the next one.
McChief
8:27 am | June 7, 2004
that was weird, but entertaining nonetheless.
airforcebrat
6:21 am | June 7, 2004
do you live on an air base, old lady?
cuz you mentioned BX(Base Exchange)
anewerdisease
3:32 am | June 7, 2004
I personally found it sorta kinda sexy
someone that you dont know
9:21 pm | June 6, 2004
ummmmmmmmmm, I cant say. Randomness I guess. Well, try using spell check next time. And lol, I remember my first fanfic that wasnt a poem. I had to write a useless paragraph at the end also.
anonymous
4:30 pm | June 6, 2004
that was helluv strange
Nick Kang
3:30 pm | June 6, 2004
lol, YAAFM

NK
DarkLite
1:14 pm | June 6, 2004
YAAFM
alex
12:41 pm | June 6, 2004
lol that was different...okay...
-=wtf=-lOser gUy
12:41 pm | June 6, 2004
"wasnt that exiting" waht do u mean by exiting, i think u mean exciting. And what is up with the story its just plain weird. oh ya and who is teronne and nik and tucker and patrick? just wonderin.


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