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someone
7:39 pm | December 19, 2003
so far i havent seen any positive comments on this poem so i wont stop it now. The poem was nice and all but if you spelt faith wrong on purpose then you are a loser and if you really dont know how to spell faith then you're a dumb@$$
crashedwarthog
2:18 am | October 1, 2003
who are you calling a nobody ish? i've contributed to this site to so dont call me a nobody
Jamirus99
6:39 pm | September 30, 2003
Ish, if you feel these poems are good, that's great. i think they're trash, and trash with mis-spelled titles.

....Carry on.
Sergeant B
12:30 am | September 30, 2003
Hey Scribe! Look! You mispelled people! PEOPLE, not ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
*HhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaHaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa*
Ishkabibbl
9:18 pm | September 29, 2003
Why do nobody's make fun of good authors?
Walker
8:24 pm | September 29, 2003
Yes, besides the obvious drawback, this one was another good poem. But the obvious problem was there, so it pretty much screwed any chance of this poem sounding good. If you resubmitted a corrected version of this, it would do a lot for this peice. Good luck.

Semper Fi

-Walker
The Scribe
3:38 pm | September 29, 2003
Hey, ppl make mistakes. But that's okay. I'm not really sure if you meant to mispell faith, because I've read previous stories of your's and they're very good. Just write your story in WORD and then post it, so that way your mistakes for spelling can be checked.
The Scribe
3:38 pm | September 29, 2003
Hey, ppl make mistakes. But that's okay. I'm not really sure if you meant to mispell faith, because I've read previous stories of your's and they're very good. Just write your story in WORD and then post it, so that way your mistakes for spelling can be checked.
riot
1:53 pm | September 29, 2003
oh my god. you misspelled the title of the poem! you're such a loser.
Mainevent
10:42 am | September 29, 2003
Never give up on me
Never lose faith in me
Never turn your back on me

I'm just getting started

Fighting an endless battle
Never giving up hope
Fearless to death itself

I'm doing my part

Defeat is everlasting
Victory is scarce
Death is for ever

I'm losing

After I fall to the bloody ground
I step back up
Never giving up

I am a Marine; have faith in me
crashedwarthog
10:10 am | September 29, 2003
ITS FAITH!! NOT FATH! F.A.I.T.H


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