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Comments for 'A Lost Spartan Name Shadow'

7:10 am | March 28, 2004
V emotional. V expressive. V nice.
8:44 pm | September 25, 2003
wu's gonna kick me off this site? how? explain to me how.
Alpha Lance
8:17 pm | September 24, 2003
Oh, but riot been on here for a long time.
2:42 am | September 24, 2003
What I meant was that riot and anonymous are names someone else on this site uses when they want to insult you but avoid repercussions.
Alpha Lance
8:02 pm | September 23, 2003
What? I don't really get what your talking about Walker.
Alpha Lance
7:39 pm | September 23, 2003
Thanks everyone for supporting me.

And riot, Wu could kick you off this site. He doesn't put up with that kind of crap.
11:08 am | September 23, 2003
what are you gonna do if i don't stay off? your stories suck dude. as long as you keep writing crap, i'll keep making fun of it.
12:57 am | September 23, 2003
Ahh don't worry about those people. If they really cared about the grammar and all, they'd give you pointers and advice.
10:57 pm | September 22, 2003
It's interesting how riot and anonymous seem only to keep to your review columns, Alpha. I think they're the non-you versions of someone else who is usually on this site.

Semper Fi

10:23 pm | September 22, 2003
Alpha Lance
9:16 pm | September 22, 2003
Thanks everyone, I'm glade you like it.

Riot and no name, stay off my review column. It will be the best for all of us.
8:27 pm | September 22, 2003
Much better than the other poem of yours posted today, Alpha Lance. This one's got some meat to it.
8:27 pm | September 22, 2003
walker, are you serious?! you'd have to be at least a little mentally handicapped to be affected by this crap. there is nothing special or worth reading in this poem and 'error-free' is a joke.
8:15 pm | September 22, 2003
Very good, very good, Alpha. It almost made me cry for Shadow, his lost past, and his lack of reason to live. I love your poetry; I could never make something like this based on Halo. As always, keep it up. I think this one was just about grammar error-free.

Semper Fi

7:05 pm | September 22, 2003
dont listen to anymouns 10/10
6:25 pm | September 22, 2003
Not quite sure, but I think a different author before you used a Spartan named shadow for a big 'ole series(Spartan III in rise to honor or somthing) dont' feel like checking it up, just saying.
4:41 pm | September 22, 2003
Nice poem. I'll be sending your story back soon, be patient, we lost power for a while.
3:18 pm | September 22, 2003
Sergeant B
10:24 am | September 22, 2003
Two poems in one post! Excellent!