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Comments for 'Temporal Rift PART III: LOST IN SPACE'

Alpha Lance
1:27 am | November 3, 2003
No, you can just look here at HBO for the excerpt.

BTW, good story.
6:04 pm | November 1, 2003
Just go to RandomHouse.com, search Halo: First Strike, and read the excerpt, it'll straighten you out.
4:36 pm | November 1, 2003
Yes I know I suck when it comes to gramatical errors like that.
I remember kelly asking to lead the orbital team but MC took that team himself. Then he told Fred to lead the ground team (which I thought was odd). I cant find my book at the moment so you might be right though.
4:27 pm | November 1, 2003
kelly was in charge of the Spartans going down to Reach, not Fred. spread out your paragraphs a little, and use the [indent] button for the beginning of each paragraph. other than that, not bad