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Comments for 'The Outer Limits (A Marine's Tale) chap 3'

2:33 am | June 5, 2002
Nice but it needs a few things which i already IMed you about. In all keep trying
1:28 am | June 5, 2002
hey you have the right idea .... my sugestion is read books other ppl's stories and just keep practicing
A Shadow in the Night
5:29 pm | June 4, 2002
How old are you, AGS, just wondering...Also: Your writing style could use some serious work. While I don't suggest ripping off other people, you should read a few works by established writers and look for a style that speaks to you.
6:34 pm | June 3, 2002
hey people post a comment if it to boring i'll maximize action cause its comin baby