Comments for 'The awakening (life of a Spartan) chap 1'
agsbladderboy55
9:39 pm | May 6, 2002
hey c'mon guys send in some comments i need to know how i did
Jaywhit10
8:40 pm | April 29, 2002
Its gonna go places but you to work on you grammer like paragraphs, spelling, and also distingush the dialouge from the paragraphs. Keep writing and you'll get it.
