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Comments for 'Project: Shadow Spartan, Chapter 12(Finale)'



juggalo90
12:56 pm | February 15, 2004
dude, IT SUCKED! the storyline made almost no sense, you over explained everything! I mean MA7B this M6D that I was usin this instead of sleeping pills! dude no offense, but it sucked
spartan 111
3:36 pm | August 20, 2003
sweet piece of shit ya got here ,nice storY 1ine. why dinnt sam use da invisibility on his armour? whos spoofin moniter 101 again?
Spartan415 (Former MM)
3:12 pm | August 17, 2003
Hey i cant believe theres people still doing that shit with the faking names nd stuff i remember a guy a while back a year ago who did that in everything well ill see probably come back in a month good story shade. see ya
Spartan117
2:54 am | August 13, 2003
dude, your series kicked ass! you also inspired me to write stories. my Prologue is already written, its called Marines will win this war, not Spartans by Michael Gillespie, and the rest will be called Spartan Project III
monitor101
9:56 pm | August 12, 2003
Now thanks Hunter_killer and the post under me is more than definetly Hawk.
"ThiS Story IS teh Uber KeWL, and any1 who says anything is a GaY Monkee and I am GoiNG to TrACk U D
1:59 pm | August 12, 2003
hi
Arinoth Koby
3:05 am | August 12, 2003
thanks Hunter_Killer and i think ur right about Hawk or what ever his name is
Hunter_Killer
1:35 am | August 12, 2003
I know who done it! It was the fuckin asshole, named Hawk8776[Or something like that]

Hawk's a fuckin asshole, he's on crack i know him.

He'll say this sux, as soon as he gets here.

Do me a favor, send an unpleasant post to Hawk. Thanks.

Oh, and I belive you, montior. You wouldn't do that, ever!

Hmmm... could be Louis Wu.. =)

Oh, yah. The fic. Fucking kick ass!!! 2414547124876545361.131347358621761743156165328765651261351/10 lol.
Arinoth Koby
9:48 pm | August 11, 2003
I am Arinoth and i did not pretend to be u as acused by others
monitor101
9:03 pm | August 11, 2003
Ok I'm confused was it Arnitth Koby and is Admin Louis Woo?
Arinoth Koby
7:03 pm | August 11, 2003
And to Agent Shade, my friend, i dunno if im ever gonna do that fan fic, i just think i'll end up writing it as crap
Arinoth Koby
7:03 pm | August 11, 2003
And to Agent Shade, my friend, i dunno if im ever gonna do that fan fic, i just think i'll end up writing it as crap
Arinoth Koby
7:01 pm | August 11, 2003
wow that last post i think i confused myself, but the bottom line is i, Arinoth Koby did not post that comment, i have others who using the same ip as i do since i am on a network so it could have been one of them, but i honestly did not dis my friend Agent Shade
Arinoth Koby
6:59 pm | August 11, 2003
monitor101
6:33 PM | August 11, 2003
Sorry for the triple post and I am reporting this to Louis Woo you smartass who posted under my name.


Thank you monitor101 and my friend Agent Shade for at least believing me unlike this ADMIN person who is obviously Louis Woo
Arinoth Koby
6:57 pm | August 11, 2003
ok....what the hell? I would spoof a best friend why? Me and Agent Shade are best friends in real life and i think he write fabulous fanfiction and stories in general. But if people want to go randomly accussing me of things to cover their own track well what ever. Agent Shade and i trust each other and wouldn't do something as low as that
Agent Shade
6:52 pm | August 11, 2003
no worries, i kind of figured it wasn't monitor afterwards. no harm done, sorry for my post, enjot the stories
ADMIN
5:56 pm | August 11, 2003
It wasn't monitor101, it was Arinoth Koby.

Spoofing people is a really stupid thing to do.
monitor101
5:33 pm | August 11, 2003
Sorry for the triple post and I am reporting this to Louis Woo you smartass who posted under my name.
monitor101
5:31 pm | August 11, 2003
OK that was not fucking me I swear to god this is my first time back at fanfiction I wasn't even here when that comment was posted. You sonof a bitch whoever fucking posted that comment will die. Shade I would never change my mind that fast.
monitor101
5:31 pm | August 11, 2003
OK that was not fucking me I swear to god this is my first time back at fanfiction I wasn't even here when that comment was posted. You sonof a bitch whoever fucking posted that comment will die. Shade I would never change my mind that fast.
monitor101
5:31 pm | August 11, 2003
OK that was not fucking me I swear to god this is my first time back at fanfiction I wasn't even here when that comment was posted. You sonof a bitch whoever fucking posted that comment will die. Shade I would never change my mind that fast.
pooman
4:21 pm | August 11, 2003
ya it probally wasent moninotor
Wiley
1:44 pm | August 11, 2003
I don't think that last comment was really monitor101...
Arinoth Koby
11:47 am | August 11, 2003
nice ending dude!
Agent Shade
1:03 am | August 11, 2003
monitor, i really do not wish to be your "friend" as you stated if all you do is yell at me...go away and never talk to me again please
monitor101
10:44 pm | August 10, 2003
fuck off agent shade
Helljumper
10:03 pm | August 8, 2003
Great great great stuff, awesome series, and cool ending...keep on writing!!! 10/10
monitor101
9:27 pm | August 7, 2003
No thanks needed shade just friendship.
Wiley
3:41 pm | August 7, 2003
awesome. hope you continue writing.
10/10
JCDenton
2:44 pm | August 7, 2003
ahh the endings... I brainstormed about it a long time ago for my own story. I read this and I must say good job. good ending.

myself, I would try to make a great ending too but not only. great plottwists as the like. try something expecially new. I got ideas but giving those away... try to find out too. great inspiration.
Don Q
12:14 pm | August 7, 2003
Bello (spanish). But in english it means beautiful. That was some coll series.
Kaboose
2:17 am | August 7, 2003
This was a great series...you're so awesome...10/10
Agent Shade
1:24 am | August 7, 2003
thanks a lot guys
scope
12:09 am | August 7, 2003
10/10 This story has my HALO blessings
Coolio
12:02 am | August 7, 2003
Sweet! I loved this series so much. What's interesting about it is that Josh's character has been mentioned in various stories, ranging from his conscription into the SPARTAN-III program, his battles with the Covenant, and then finally to his rebellion, insanity and then demise. Such a well-developed character over time was a good choice for this story.
Alpha Lance
10:35 pm | August 6, 2003
Sweet,will sweet,so freakin sweet for words!10/10
Tango709
9:27 pm | August 6, 2003
yahoo! the saga ends... this was awesome, Shade
Shinai Purugganan
9:07 pm | August 6, 2003
Nicely done. Good ending. You got all the props for this one.
Agent Shade
7:28 pm | August 6, 2003
thanks guys and thank you as well monitor
Elfster
6:39 pm | August 6, 2003
Well this IS 500 years after now.

Anyways, it was totally kickass except it would have had more of a sad but more complete twist is Sam couldnt get out in time and got caught in the blast, thus giving his life to kill Josh

But it was still kickass.

10/10
pooman
6:32 pm | August 6, 2003
dude ur so fuckin awesome 10/10
monitor101
6:18 pm | August 6, 2003
Yay ending I love endings. That was awesome shade the Spartan battle kicked ass! 10/10 no mistakes whatsover. I put the past behind me and move on. This is fanfiction not fan fighting. Whoa 125 years old thats old can I always thought Spartans lived as long as normal Humans!


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