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Comments for 'Zanzibar: The Waterworks-Chapter 13'



Elitehunter676
7:37 pm | July 13, 2004
Wow dude your Eric Nylund in disguise, keep up the good work.
343 Salty Beans
4:55 pm | July 13, 2004
Bah! I'm telling you, I'm really not that good. I do enjoy your compliments, though. Thanks.

343SB
Havok
11:00 am | July 13, 2004
hell, salkty beans, the fact is, you are on par with the greats here. better, even. Wado was too long winded, el-halo-diablo was too cynical,sarge was sarge, and my stories just sucked. but i call myself a great anyways....(where did all my compadres from the old days go???)
Havok
11:00 am | July 13, 2004
hell, salkty beans, the fact is, you are on par with the greats here. better, even. Wado was too long winded, el-halo-diablo was too cynical,sarge was sarge, and my stories just sucked. but i call myself a great anyways....(where did all my compadres from the old days go???)
Dave Luck
5:24 pm | July 12, 2004
I don't care if Grace is dead!

Heck, I wrote a story (It was never submitted) where the war is over. John goes to the memorial, and says, "Rest in Peace, Sam. Rest in Peace, Kelly." Then suddenly, Sam says, "Rest? No." John turns around, sees Sam, and Sam says, "You can't keep a good friend down! After all, I had to come back for Max, my pet turtle, and besides, Grace, James and Malcolm wanted to see hockey night in Canada...."

It doesn't matter if Grace dies! She's still awesome!

I always loved chemistry, and since Grace is the Explosives Enthusiast, I think I'd like to meet her. If she was real. Too bad she isn't. I've always liked to conduct experiments using chemistry supplies, for educational purposes only. Here, try this formula.

8 Parts Charcoal Dust
6 Parts sulfur
2 Parts saltpeter.

This formula will yield quite a blast, literally. It's black powder. Kaboom. Grind the ingredients extra fine and shake it up in a bottle for best results.

Note: I am not responsible for the loss of fingers or arms. Please do not email me for more formulas, I've already said too much.

- Dave.
No one
12:45 pm | July 12, 2004
This story takes place on earth. (I think)
He said in the first he was going to use carachters even if they died in first strike. But wat an excellent story. Keep it up.
!@#$
2:18 am | July 12, 2004
I wonder if this is after this is after the First Strike. Because Grace died when a Brute broke her midsection with a slug thrower.
343 Salty Beans
2:13 am | July 12, 2004
They're not that good...you act as if I'm better than Wado or all those other good guys.

Sorry all, but I'm not gonna be able to finish the next part in time...I leave tomorrow at 7 in the morning. Be back Saturday, and then I'll probably release my next chapter.

Darn.

343SB
white grunt
9:34 pm | July 11, 2004
you should do this for a living make cash
white grunt
9:32 pm | July 11, 2004
amazing story's
343 Salty Beans
11:56 am | July 11, 2004
Interesting story, Dave...

Anyhoo, thanks all. Remember, I'm out of town from the 13-19, so don't expect any FFs between then. However, I'm trying to finish the next chapter before I go surfing for a whole week :). Ain't Cali grand?

Once again, thanks for the comics.

OpeningAct, I got it. I sent you back a few things.

343SB
Dave Luck
11:26 am | July 11, 2004
Yes! I've been waiting for this. Make that 'N' Key your shift Key as well, there was a double-cap problem.

Yeah, that reminded me of when I fell asleep at the computer, with my nose jamming down the 'F' key. I had to use a pencil to pry it up. Then the tip snapped off and caught under the 'V' and 'C' Keys, and it jammed them. I had to get a new keyboard!

Excellent man, keep it up!

- Dave.
Chuckles
8:51 am | July 11, 2004
Good job, SB. You have a great story line going.

C.T. Clown
Pho
9:39 pm | July 10, 2004
superb.
scottisonfire
3:57 pm | July 10, 2004
wow dude i love these stories!:D
hunter_that_dances
3:16 pm | July 10, 2004
one word-excellent
OpeningAct
1:10 pm | July 10, 2004
Yay! I've finally caught up with this story!
Great job as well!

OA

P.S Did you get my proposal over at HFS? It'll be in your message-box.


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