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Comments for 'The Battle For Sigma Octanus Chapter 2'



moniter101
10:27 pm | February 10, 2003
thanx for the comments hay sup jt and Nike you'll probable see spellinng errors on every chapter.
jwtchoo
10:05 pm | February 9, 2003
this is a great story, I would give it a 9 out of 10. the charecters are great and the story line is very exiting.
Nike
8:55 pm | February 9, 2003
I'm back. I was on a snowboarding/snowtubing trip at Ski Liberty in Gettysburg with my parents and some of my mom's friends from where she works. Anyways...

Rating: 8.9/10

Pros: Again, nice detail and names.

Cons: A couple of minor punctuation and grammar issues, but nothing major was wrong.


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