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Comments for 'Casualties of War Part IV' |
Halo
11:58 am | April 26, 2004
u suck
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Tom
7:21 pm | April 23, 2004
Well let me know what you think.
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Nick Kang
12:57 am | April 22, 2004
Yes I too thought it was good. As Mainevent said, good pelling, grammar, and sentence structure, though a bit confusing towards the end. I'll have to read the rest of the series.
9.4/10
NK
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Tom
8:09 pm | April 21, 2004
Thanks a lot. It's good to get feedback, although after rereading this part I feel it's by far my worst one. Ah well, I've got two more parts in the can already. I'll release them eventually.
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Mainevent
8:00 pm | April 21, 2004
I haven't read any other part of this series other than this one, but it seems good to me from what I've read.
Good spelling, grammar, sentence construction, and overall character development. I'll give you more when I finish the whole series. Don't know when that'll be though.
Anyhow, just letting you know this one isn't half bad.
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Tom
5:20 pm | April 21, 2004
I really do feel strongly that this series is very interesting, and I recommend reading it. Even if no one does, I'll probably still finish it.
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