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Comments for 'The Last Hope For Outpost Bravo: Part 2'



Alpha Lance
9:32 pm | July 27, 2003
Are you 5 or something,because its just one big
paragraph.
Nightblade
3:30 am | July 13, 2003
Sweet. 8.53/10
pj-NYkr90
9:34 pm | July 12, 2003
Good, they don't sound like they're about to get involved in a gang war anymore. Keep up the good work on the fight scenes. But, there should be more dialouge.


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