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Comments for 'Running Riot- Part 1' |
Steele
10:19 pm | July 19, 2003
Okay, kinda confusing. Everytime someone new speaks, it's a new paragraph. Use a word processor if you're able. Please the story wasn't that bad, but the grammar was...well...I won't say anything.
Improve the grammar and you might have a good story here...
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Ishkabibbl
5:31 pm | July 19, 2003
I before e, except after c.
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Simon
2:58 pm | July 19, 2003
Cool! A compliment from Gasmask!
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Gasmask
2:20 pm | July 19, 2003
Wow. Interesting plot, looking forward to the next installment!
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