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Comments for 'On A Pale Horse: Silent Assasin'



'Nosolee
4:17 pm | July 7, 2003
A-O, lets go. I ran Capit-O-lization through a spell check too cause i didnt know if it was right. No red line appeared, so I figured it was right. Still look at the spelling and grammar.
Jamirus99
11:00 am | July 7, 2003
Yeah! News from Nike and a decent fan fic to boot! However, Chief was carrying the one SMG to begin with at the end of the trailer, not the battle rifle....otherwise, a promising start.
Silent Hunter
12:07 pm | July 6, 2003
I love when people talk about spelling and grammer, and then spell Capitalization wrong...
(I ran "Capitalization" through a spell checker ;)
'Nosolee
6:25 pm | July 5, 2003
Very cool, some errors such as spelling, punctuation, and capitolization. Still good: 9/10. Cant wait for more.
Silent Hunter
10:42 pm | July 4, 2003
thanks!
Bluestone
6:25 pm | July 4, 2003
That was great, nice one. I liked the way it carried on from the E3 2003 Demo Vid.
Nike
3:50 pm | July 4, 2003
P.S. Happy Fourth of July to all! (I also turned twelve on the 25th last month).
Nike
1:32 pm | July 4, 2003
Pretty good. It has been awhile. I got a new comp, so I'll be sending in my next few chapters when I get the chance.

Keep up the great work!


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