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Comments for 'Rise To Honor - Part 6: Getting On the Horse'



Cultivated Human
2:58 pm | July 8, 2002
Severed limbs CAN wait. No complaints. This series is suh-weet.
Immortal Warthog
12:03 pm | July 7, 2002
I agree with TrueNike on that one. I've just started reading this series. No complaits, Shadow. The number 1 best fanfic series. Period.
Archangels Blade
5:53 pm | July 6, 2002
Of course the body parts can wait. This really adds to what is going down in New York, however. I still say it's good.
Jaywhit10
11:36 am | July 6, 2002
I love this story. Even if there wasn't any action in this, its very good. Can't wait for the next part. Keep It Up
saturn
4:06 am | July 6, 2002
sheared limbs can always wait anthother day. this progresses the story very nicely.
Knightmare Wolf
2:27 am | July 6, 2002
Oh, O'kay!
Living_Sacrifice86
2:24 am | July 6, 2002
It's a great story Shadow a little bit of grammar mistakes im still hooked on the series though
TrueNike
9:34 pm | July 5, 2002
That's not what I mean, Wolf. It's just a BREAK from the action, which is good once in awhile. What with body parts comin off. Not to say it's disgusting, heaven forbid.
Archangels Blade
8:00 pm | July 5, 2002
Very, very nice. Adds a good bit to the story. Nike, you've gotta relax about the action, however. To quote Knightmare Wolf, "If every story had action, action, action, and yes more action, in every chapter, we'd have pretty suck ass stories". It's good Shadow, keep it coming, and watch the grammar.
Spartan415
12:21 pm | July 5, 2002
wolf was right and all in all good story
Knightmare Wolf
11:49 am | July 5, 2002
Action nike? If every story had action, action, action, and yes more action, in every chapter, we'd have pretty suck ass stories. Shadow, a good story in all, maybe one or two of those things in it though, to point one out: "Now since Shadow has graciously covered all possible casualties for US by taking out the mercenaries for US" It could have been a bit better by saying "Now since Shadow has graciously covered all possible casualties by taking out the mercenaries for us" realize this point is now useless since its over and done with but it may be helpful in the future!Great story!
Spartan III
4:46 am | July 5, 2002
This is one great story. I actually have no complaints at all. Keep those chapters comin.
Shadow
1:28 am | July 5, 2002
Thanx Knightmare for the pointer.
TrueNike
7:19 pm | July 4, 2002
No action but hey, at least it moves the story along.


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