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Comments for 'The Techie's Story' |
The Collector
1:53 am | May 5, 2004
Hmph....
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CoLd BlooDed
1:28 am | May 5, 2004
Nah, it's just some crazy time thing that HBO is set at.
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spectre
12:56 am | May 5, 2004
And why does the time say I posted four hours later then I do? Are you's in like Britain or something?
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spectre
9:18 pm | May 4, 2004
And the "techie" remains forever nameless.
Pretty good though.
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Severian
1:17 am | May 4, 2004
You are, I believe, the first one to notice.
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CoLd BlooDed
12:47 am | May 4, 2004
It was okay, yes, you need to use the code and fix up the formatting, but besides that, it was good.
There was something missing, though, don't know what, but it was.
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SeverianofUrth
10:24 pm | May 3, 2004
Changing name to just Severian... As soon as the next-next story comes out. And yeah, they suck just like this one. I [i]do[/i] use the code on the second one, though.
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SeverianofUrth
10:24 pm | May 3, 2004
Wow, thanks... I thought everyone hated the noobies like me.
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Nick Kang
9:52 pm | May 3, 2004
I was originally gonna write 'the noobies', but then realized I would be insulting the author. (Can't spell name)
NK
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SeverianofUrth
9:27 pm | May 3, 2004
And please don't read my other two stories (one out, other coming). I already submitted them so I can't do anything about it, but trust me when I say that it sucks.
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SeverianofUrth
9:18 pm | May 3, 2004
damn code... no wonder everyone knew I was a noob.
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CoLd BlooDed
3:59 pm | May 3, 2004
Or even the pedophiles.
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CoLd BlooDed
3:59 pm | May 3, 2004
Oh, and I'll read the story once I get back from school.
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Nick Kang
11:33 am | May 3, 2004
Yes, listen to The Silver Spartan! The code is what separates us from the animals! We shall hail the code! lol
Now for the story. It was pretty good. You could have used a bit more detail in there, but it's still good.
8.4/10
NK
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SeverianofUrth
11:02 am | May 3, 2004
I messed up alot in this story... Thanks for the advices, everyone.
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Helljumper
12:30 am | May 3, 2004
"Yes, listen to The Silver Spartan! The code is what separates us from the animals! We shall hail the code!"
now thats funny
I would revise it and say "The code is what separates us from the noobies"
ODST
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Mainevent
3:56 pm | May 2, 2004
Helljumpers are cocky bastards.
Reminded me of Black Hawk Down. Where Delta Force is the Spartans and Rangers are the ODSTs. A lot of awkward hostility there.
But they are the next best thing to Spartans, so they pretty much have a right to be.
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Helljumper
2:56 pm | May 2, 2004
Damn Silver Spartan speaks the truth. I thought the story was kinda funny. "And the Helljumpers are even worse- the cocky bastards think their the best." i would flame you but damn it you are right. Plus you had the Helljumpers fight to the death. It was good for a short story and I did laugh (don't tell anyone that I do that)
ODST
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The Silver Spartan
1:57 pm | May 2, 2004
This was a good story, not great but good (8.5/10), it would be a (9.1/10) if you used the pseudocode ([Indent], [hr], [b][/b], etc etc...) Read the "Read This Before Submitting Fiction" Button it will explain this in detail.
A tip, listen to: MC's Cousin (he likes to offer advise), Mainevent, Helljumper, CoLd BlooDed, Jillybean, and FOrunnER.
One final tip, you dissed ODSTs so you are Probably gonna be flamed by Helljumper.
The Silver Spartan
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