Scott D
7:08 pm | April 6, 2004
goo! no kidding, this will teach me to post without proofreading
The Collector
2:15 am | April 6, 2004
Not bad but u got a few gramatical erros here buddy. The story is progrssing pretty good. I wanna see where this is gonna end. Great job.
P.S. Next time go over it in hard copy form cuz if you proof read through the pc u might not catch the mistakes
