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Comments for 'The Siege of Zion Base; Part Two: Siege - Chapter Ten'



MC's Cousin
10:43 pm | February 26, 2004
Still got it you do. Liking it liking it, I'm liking it. Though your flow is a little off and you have a repedetiveness problem, otherwise, it was great. Keep up the goodness.

Signing Off


MCC
Phalanx3580
2:03 am | February 26, 2004
great story i really liked it keep on writing more of them
because they are very much worthy of praise


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