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Comments for 'The Jump, Part one in a Series' |
Stefano Scalia
8:35 pm | November 19, 2002
Thanks for the comments. I'm going to post another story very, very soon. A next in the series, if you will, of this. Enjoy!
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el_halo_diablo
6:03 pm | August 12, 2002
greaat. with 2 a's, jeese
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saturn
8:02 pm | August 11, 2002
intelligent, with 2 Ls. gosh.
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ThReaDeDacE3
10:32 pm | August 10, 2002
I havent seen you much posting comments and all, but you have the start to a good story here. keep it up.
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el_halo_diablo
6:32 pm | August 10, 2002
oops i spelled inteligent wrong ;D
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el_halo_diablo
6:30 pm | August 10, 2002
hmmm it was short but i dont blame you, I mean how long can a story about a slipstream jump be? ;pAnyways it was not bad, but you dont have to strees the point by saying 'f***' it makes you sound less intelegent.
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saturn
6:16 pm | August 10, 2002
for a novice to HBO, I can predict you will be very decorated in the future. You have a unique twist and i like your dialogue better than many veterans here.
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Knightmare
10:48 am | August 10, 2002
Simple name, good story.
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