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Comments for 'Well Enough Alone Part III: Unforseen Shadows' |
Andrew
3:08 am | December 21, 2003
"I cannot loose, thought the Master Cheif, I will not loose." Like blah Bob said its lose and second its "Master Chief"... editing helps
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blah Bob
10:46 pm | May 2, 2002
lose! lose! lose!not loose!!sorry, but someone had to say it
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vector40
2:40 am | April 10, 2002
Never, ever, ever underestimate the Mr. Bertram Wuster.He sees all.
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Ryan
8:49 pm | April 9, 2002
AH!!!!!!!!!!*pants* Shit, you shouldn't scare people like that...
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Louis Wu
3:18 pm | April 9, 2002
Or maybe I do...:)
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Ryan
2:54 pm | April 9, 2002
Thanks for the tip, I never thought of that. I guess the folks around here arn't as old fasioned as I thought... oh... Sorry Louis, but it's not like you read this anyway. :)
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vector40
4:59 am | April 9, 2002
You should try sending in your stuff as an attached file, instead of cutting-and-pasting into an email... doing that always ends up slaughtering the formatting.:)
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Ryan
1:51 am | April 9, 2002
I hope you enjoy. There are some minor errors in there, which my read-over-once editing process seemed to miss. There is a point where it says "...and let out a deep sight". That should be sigh, of course. It also seems that the transfer to HBO caused my italics to fade... please decifer what is thought, and what is not. It shouldn't be hard. Also, notice the change from first person to third person. I'm better at third, so I canned the shitty first. Please excuse the change.
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