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Comments for 'Not Well Enough Alone!'



Reiyou
11:45 am | May 9, 2004
They would've been posted in earlier steps as I would've posted them more evenly out and it happened I was able to get them on here. So I sent all of them at once.
CoLd BlooDed
5:31 am | May 9, 2004
Not a good idea.
Nick Kang
2:42 pm | May 8, 2004
I'm not sure how long it's been since you've been here, Reiyou, but NOW that's commonly referred to as 'spam.'

NK
SeverianofUrth
11:29 am | May 8, 2004
Wow... I think there's like 7 fics that's all yours in a row. Been busy lately?
Mr. Bill
5:29 pm | May 7, 2004
Quite nice- a very clean action flick.
Lance Johnson
5:11 pm | May 7, 2004
i agree with cold, you should spend more time on it, correcting and perfecting, but otherwise bravo!
CoLd BlooDed
3:59 pm | May 7, 2004
It was okay, you didn't take enough time to introduce your characters, and your punctuation is a bit off. Either way, it was decent.

Work on that stuff and you'll do better.


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