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Comments for 'Halo 2:The Invasion Part II:The Escape'



Hikaru-119
12:21 am | May 7, 2004
Needs grammar fixing, proper quoting towards the end(you forgot things that were said in the E3 video, shame on you), detail detail detail, should be longer, and that's about it. Good luck with your next section.
Giovanni A. Bryden
12:43 am | May 6, 2004
Nice one chris.


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