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Comments for 'Branded for Life Part 1'



javier fernandez-vina
12:54 pm | October 16, 2003
Oh shit, the convenants have spartants now were fucked.
PaYnE
9:56 pm | October 15, 2003
heheheehehhe......Spartans Die!
Jackal Jak
9:00 pm | October 15, 2003
Spartans! Oh my god! Great twist, I'll be looking foreward to the next one
Mainevent
8:24 pm | October 15, 2003
Your story is ok.

You need to work on punctuation.

Other than that, it's not bad.
PaYnE
7:39 pm | October 15, 2003
please post commentss for my story...


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