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Comments for 'The Fight for Bravo Base; pt. 6- Evac'



ONI_operative_343
11:29 am | October 21, 2003
nevermind, UNSC... nice story, by the way
ONI_operative_343
8:31 pm | October 16, 2003
odd, UNSC...

u dont show up in the databank as having submitted a story.

how can i read one if there isnt one to read..?
UNSC_Spec._117
2:11 pm | October 16, 2003
great job 9.7
UNSC_Spec._117
2:04 pm | October 16, 2003
Great one, awsome, well I have nothing negative to say other than sentences dont start with "and." other than that the get better and better every day- gimmy a sneek preview on the nect one. How many are there going to be? Well when u get a chance read mine--
MasterGrunt
11:02 am | October 13, 2003
Good story. Very realistic.
Alpha Lance
8:17 pm | October 11, 2003
Sweet. *said in a Cartman voice*
ONI_operative_343
8:15 pm | October 11, 2003
thanks guys. the next ones comin soon.....
Mainevent
10:28 pm | October 10, 2003
You can start a sentence with and, but you really don't want to. It is allowed in special occasions though.
Alpha Lance
10:23 pm | October 10, 2003
Wow...your stories are geting better every time. You also had some improvements. BTW, never start a sentence with "and." But everything else is great, and remember, I'm a fan. 9.8/10
FOrunnER
9:25 pm | October 10, 2003
I got first post. Awsome man,keep them coming. There's nothing I can really critize you on, youre writing like a veteran fan fic writer *sniffles* he's all grown up *sniffle*

Keep em coming, 9/10
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9:25 pm | October 10, 2003
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