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Comments for 'Suicide Run' |
Nick Kang
4:06 pm | May 1, 2004
Thanks Odin.
NK
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SOS.Odin
1:46 pm | May 1, 2004
omg i didnt even see this
sry nick
good story though
kept me reading
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SOS.Odin
1:46 pm | May 1, 2004
omg i didnt even see this
sry nick
good story though
kept me reading
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Nick Kang
12:23 pm | May 1, 2004
Thanks for reading, I put a lot of work into this story.
NK
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Anonymous
12:11 pm | May 1, 2004
nice story
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Mainevent
9:03 pm | April 30, 2004
That's what I meant Nick, my bad.
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spectre
8:00 pm | April 30, 2004
I like the idea of elites piloting ghosts better anyway. For some reason, I just can't see grunts overwhelming you with numerical superiority....in ghosts.
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Nick Kang
7:24 pm | April 30, 2004
Do you mean the Grunts are probably just piloting them because they're there?
NK
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spectre
7:19 pm | April 30, 2004
Maybe the coveneant forces are spread so thin they can no longer afford to use elites on ghosts.....
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Mainevent
7:14 pm | April 30, 2004
Highly unlikely. The ghosts are probably just piloting them because they're there. Notice you don't see one elite until the end of the demo.
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Nick Kang
6:30 pm | April 30, 2004
I know the Ghosts were piloted by Grunts in the E3. But does that mean Elites can't pilot them now? I thought it would be a bit too easy if Clark just shot the pilo9t twice and the Ghost was disabled, so I put in Elites.
NK
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spectre
1:55 pm | April 30, 2004
I mean for the story, I figured my computer was screwing with me on the comment.
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spectre
1:53 pm | April 30, 2004
Okay, thought i did something wrong after I wrote it.
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Nick Kang
11:49 am | April 30, 2004
I just posted my next chatper of : Attack on some Human ship.
NK
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Mainevent
11:31 am | April 30, 2004
New stories are usually posted on Saturdays, Mondays, Wedensdays. Gives enough time for people to read and comment on them.
And refresh to see the last comment.
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spectre
11:00 am | April 30, 2004
Did my last comment post?
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spectre
11:00 am | April 30, 2004
Yea, Mainevent, another glaring example of my not paying attenrion to detail. My D.I. would have me in the front-lean-and rest if he read this.
On another note, could anyone tell me how long it takes for a story to get posted. I put a fanfic submission in last night at around 9:43 eastern standard, and it has yet to show up.
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Yeti
7:15 am | April 30, 2004
But the Ghosts were piloted by grunts. Take a look at the E3 demo thing and youll see that.
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Mainevent
1:42 am | April 30, 2004
I just posted half of a short story I'm working on. Hope you like it.
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Nick Kang
1:55 pm | April 29, 2004
Well actually I was gonna continue it, cause I knew a really cool ending for it. Something like:
Clark raised his battle rifle to fire, but before he could, the Brute brought it's arm down on his face.
Or something, but then decided it would be too long. So thank you all for readin.
NK
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MC's Cousin
1:35 pm | April 29, 2004
Well, I actually liked that. It's good to see how someone thought the Warhog came to the Chief. And thank you for not trying to continue on after that. Even though it could have been good, a Marines point of view for it, but still, it would have been repetitive.
Good work, I agree with Hell- and CoLd. Keep it up!
P.S. You know, I was wondering. Is there something like a "Guide for Writing Fan Fiction" or anything laying around. I think something like that should be posted, because of the apparent influx of n00bs here. Just to let them know the do-s and don't-s of the FF scene. Just a thought.
*MCC dreams: "MCC's Guide to Newbs for Writing Good Halo Fan Fiction"*
Signing Off
MCC
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Nick Kang
12:02 pm | April 29, 2004
Although you know, it could become a series if Clark somehow survives the Brute...
Aiee! Another idea! I gotta write these down.
NK
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Helljumper
11:49 am | April 29, 2004
I don't know wat everyone else is talking bout but i liked it. my ownly thing is that more people should have died.
ODST
why is a Major with a group of Privates?
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Dark-NiTe
11:35 am | April 29, 2004
I seriously thought that was one of the better pieces of yours that i've read. Keep it up.
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Nick Kang
11:20 am | April 29, 2004
Or Clark's? Cause that guy blew himself up.
NK
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Nick Kang
11:17 am | April 29, 2004
What, you mean Saveela's? Yeah...it's just that Saveela was the only one that ever talked.
And to Helljumper: The three of them were the first to get into the Warthog.
NK
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Shawn
11:04 am | April 29, 2004
Goood i got to admit but it could use some more. It also has a scetchy begining. But over all it was good gret job nk.
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CoLd BlooDed
12:34 am | April 29, 2004
Oh, and to spectre...
It doesn't need to be a series, as we already know that the driver and passenger are knocked out by the Brute. This brings me to my second problem...
There was three in the Warthog, weren't there, a driver, gunner, and passenger?
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CoLd BlooDed
12:32 am | April 29, 2004
Good work, Nick, you managed to keep me entertained with this piece. You used a good amount of detail and you described the actions fluently. Awesome stuff. Especially liked the ending...
Don't know why, I like stories where it ends off with dialogue. Keep it up, Kang!
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spectre
12:07 am | April 29, 2004
great story, would make a decent series run
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System Failure
10:01 pm | April 28, 2004
good.good. It's all I ever say but still, its good.
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Ishkabibbl
7:46 pm | April 28, 2004
Meh, like everything else I've ever noticed, it could be better and it could be worse ;-), but it certainly has more to lose then to gain.
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