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Comments for 'Halo the Aftershocks'



Nestor Nazario
12:56 pm | November 21, 2003
Sorry, for making this story poorly written for some. Believe me that the sequel will be a lot better than the first one, I rushed the first one since it was my first fan fiction. Please post up comments that and suggestions on this story and come back for the second one, Halo Recharged or Halo Reloaded, haven't decided yet. The sequel shall come out soon.
Nestor Nazario
5:46 am | November 21, 2003
I have started the sequel and it is alot better than the first one. It will be longer and better fight sequences, especially at the end one of the final battles is prettty cool. Please read the sequel, "Halo: Reloaded" and if haven't yet, read Halo the Aftershocks. The sequel come soon, expected by next week.
anonymous
9:11 pm | November 20, 2003
wow well all i have to say is that that was a truely poorly written story and it went WAY to fast, just correct some of the grammatical errors and it could be good
stuff guy
12:38 pm | November 20, 2003
come to xboxgamestorys.proboards23.com and post ur stories there!
me
2:23 am | November 20, 2003
it was da best
Nightblade
11:46 pm | November 19, 2003
awsome
ONI_operative_343
11:19 pm | November 19, 2003
uh huh...

lets just wait till halo: first strike comes out, eh?
Anonymous
10:57 pm | November 19, 2003
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