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Comments for 'MJOLNIR, Chapter Three' |
duckfoot
3:33 pm | November 4, 2003
This story is great. The plot is engrossing and the spelling and grammar is virtually perfect. I cannot wait for the next part!
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MasterGrunt
11:45 am | October 23, 2003
Great story.
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SOS.Odin
12:30 am | October 23, 2003
does sarge b write anything?
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SOS.Odin
12:30 am | October 23, 2003
pimp story man 8/10
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pooman
9:12 pm | October 20, 2003
9.5/10
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pooman
11:51 am | October 20, 2003
i enjoy this series
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Walker
4:46 pm | October 19, 2003
Dark Wolf... I think I have a new hero. I could just imagine myself sittin' in that 'Hog, my M6D kicking in my hands as the slide blew back, ejecting a shell. A beautiful image. 9.8/10, because there was some weird stuff... mispellings and such.
Semper Fi
-Walker
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Nemesis
3:07 pm | October 19, 2003
Sergeant B, there is no need to get angry, but now that my story's started, changing things like the weapon the agent uses is not possible...but if it makes the people who read my story happy, i will...wow, you have quite the temper...
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Javier Fernandez-Vina
12:39 pm | October 19, 2003
OICW, because it has a mid air explosive round.
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Sergeant B
11:42 am | October 19, 2003
Oh God Dammit Nemises, you don't listen to me!! M4A4!, not M4A1!! Geez dude. You know, why don't you just call it the M16A5. M16s are better.
Otherwise, really good. It's terrific.
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Nemesis
7:30 am | October 19, 2003
i recently just watched XXX...i guess it seemed that the way he got into the Anarchy99 was simple and easy to write about, so i used...don't worry, there won't be a toxic submarine named Ahab that he has to stop, i'm just incorporating that part of XXX into my story, nothing big...
oh and whoever person is, i think it's best to read from the prologue up and not start right now
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Elfster
5:29 am | October 19, 2003
Maybe because XXX is gay, to start with, and I never even bothered to watch that movie.
but either way, 10/10 as always, and all those rocket launchers couldve easily killed 20 or 30 people if you ask me, but whatever.
Keep up the good work... and, I might have asked this before but its like 12 in the morning where I am and I cant remember shit, so I'll ask now:
If you want to join my halo fanfic writers chapter, its www.bungie.net/perlbin/blam.pl?file=/fanclub/7186
later
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person
5:27 am | October 19, 2003
can someone tell me the plot of this story
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J-117
3:54 am | October 19, 2003
good shit, and why u rippin off of XXX?
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