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Comments for 'Devestation- Chapter 4- Fight for Halo' |
mastwerGrunt
8:42 pm | October 12, 2003
Tis okay.
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Michael
7:57 pm | October 11, 2003
Where do you get a grammer check at?
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Awesomedudeman
4:46 pm | October 9, 2003
Good storyline, and concept, and your grammar isn't terrible, and better than alot of the stories on this site. Just remeber to use the grammar check, not just the spell check, and you need to tweak it some until it sounds perfefct to you. If possible, get someone to read it for you and give you ideas, or just tell you what's wrong with it from a 3rd party point of view.
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