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Comments for 'End of the Forerunner // Chapter1'



RogueFox
12:33 pm | January 5, 2004
Good Job. Grab a beer while you're at it.
MarcusP
7:18 pm | January 4, 2004
Thanks ill pull up a chair and make myself at home. lol
'Nosolee
12:51 pm | January 4, 2004
Yes, welcome to HBO.
Awacar
4:21 pm | January 3, 2004
Yes, good, a few mistakes, but the experience wasn't spoiled. Welcome to HBO.
Solid Snake
3:27 pm | January 3, 2004
Good.
MarcusP
12:24 pm | January 3, 2004
Thanks Hawk it was my first Fanfic. Now that you mentioned the mistakes I kicked myself several times! The next installment will be better I hope!?!
Hawk7886
10:36 am | January 3, 2004
Nice idea, you just have to watch how you execute it.

Try to proofread and catch all the errors possible. Even though they don't mean much, in huge numbers they can ruin the experience.


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