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Comments for 'Specters (Part 3)' |
The Frenchman
4:05 am | July 16, 2004
Your stories are always good. The only ones I bother reading. :D
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stacey
12:30 am | June 30, 2004
good job
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CoLd BlooDed
3:14 am | June 29, 2004
Oh, really? LOL: Sorry for buggin' you, then.
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MadJackal
2:58 am | June 29, 2004
Glad you guys like it so far. I haven't written any of the other parts yet, and since I'm very strained on time, it may be a while before I can post any more stories. Oh, and CoLd BlooDed, I actually finished Forced Betrayal a while ago :) Sorry I didn't comment. I'll get to that as soon as I can.
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CoLd BlooDed
4:33 pm | June 28, 2004
Wow, just... wow. I don't think I've read the other chapters, though. I'll get on it. Good job, though on the human point of view - I've been waiting!
Say, Mad, I know it's been a long time... but have you finished the last two chapters of Forced Betrayal? :S
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Sid
3:57 pm | June 28, 2004
As usual, excellent series.
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The NEW Zak
9:18 pm | June 27, 2004
Awesome to have you back, MadJackal. This was a great story! Oh, and did any of you read romac1991's last words on the site?
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New001
4:48 am | June 27, 2004
9.7
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New001
4:44 am | June 27, 2004
Another master peice for the record books Mad. Where do you get your insperation.
P.S. I had to leave an el fudge cookie behind once. (wheep) But I came back for it. (sniff)
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Dave Luck
1:35 am | June 27, 2004
I loved the part where one of the guys has to stay behind. Very dramatic.
Some grammatical problems, some errors, but aside from that, it's good!
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MadJackal
9:12 pm | June 26, 2004
Yeah, human dialogue sounds kinda corny, which is why I generally write from the perspective of the Elites. :)
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Young Gunna
6:39 pm | June 26, 2004
Very good story, kept me interesting since I'm new here I had to read all three parts at once. Only thing I have to criticize is that the dialogue is kinda corny. Try to find a type of dialogue that flows and seems natural for you, the current dialogue is kinda keeping the story from being a ten. 9.0/10 because of the dialogue.
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BansheeBoy
6:03 pm | June 26, 2004
Good to have you back Mad. Also to any of my fans ( if i have any ) I'm not dead, I'm just having trouble submitting, damn it!
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Pho
5:51 pm | June 26, 2004
very good. i like it a lot. Samurais kick butt, alien or not. hahahaha
9.5/10
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