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Comments for 'Halo: The Final Fight Chapter 2'



Bruce
9:06 pm | November 11, 2002
Oh! So you're mc15?
daniel Luiken
5:53 pm | November 8, 2002
Wado is right the date in the story is a typo it is suppose to be September 9 not 7 just to let you know. I have had a lot of people tell me to put in some new weapons and i promise you that there will be some new weapons and vehicles in the future just hang in there, it may be a while but it will be worth the wait.There will also be some new enemies and more powerful enemies that im sure the dangerous people will really like. As I have asked please send your comments to my email addresse Masterchief15@juno.com it will be easier for me. thank you.
Wado
6:09 am | November 4, 2002
I think a date in the story has a typo, the last date is two days before the start of the story but I think it is supposed to be after the start.

The story itself had some nice elements, I like the part where the UNSC ship comes out of slip space between the Covenant ship and the Longsword and takes the torpedoes that were targeting the Longsword -- Sounds like something out of a Tom Clancy novel.Some of your weapon designs are cool but now the rage is Halo 2 so you might want to pick up on the Battle Rifle they will have on Halo 2 (an AR with a scope and a slower rate of fire) just in case you didn't already know about it.Keep up the writing, looking forward to reading more from you.And the Anonymous comment below, please ignore. That kind of comment is just not helpful at all.

Anonymous
11:28 pm | November 1, 2002
NO MORE FREAKS UNDER THEIR FULL NAMES!!!
*Flips off Dan*


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